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對于備考過雅思的小伙伴而言，想必都清楚雅思寫作提分有多難。不少“烤鴨”在備考雅思寫作時(shí)，常常投入了100%的精力，可收獲的回報(bào)卻不足10%。那么，若想提高雅思寫作分?jǐn)?shù)，究竟需要注意些什么呢？

雅思官方寫作評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

Task Achievement (TA) / Task Response (TR)-任務(wù)完成情況（Task 1）/任務(wù)回答情況（Task 2）；

Coherence and Cohesion (CC)-連貫與銜接；

Lexical Resource (LR)-詞匯豐富度；

Grammatical Range and Accuracy (GRA)-語法多樣性和準(zhǔn)確性。

那么，了解了雅思寫作評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)之后，就可以對癥下藥。今天，Eric老師重點(diǎn)帶大家了解其中一項(xiàng)評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)—Task Response (TR)：任務(wù)回答情況（Task 2）。

什么是TR?

在AC和GT寫作考試的任務(wù)2中，考生需要針對給定的問題或陳述提示，提出并展開自己的立場，字?jǐn)?shù)不少于250詞。觀點(diǎn)需有證據(jù)支持，例子可來自考生自身經(jīng)歷。

① whether a (clear and fully developed) position is presented：全文是否有個(gè)人立場的清晰呈現(xiàn)；

② whether ideas are relevant, (fully) extended and (well) supported：是否出現(xiàn)了切題的觀點(diǎn)并有效論證；

③ whether repetitions, lapses, or omissions occur：是否出現(xiàn)重復(fù)、疏漏或內(nèi)容缺失。

回應(yīng)充分度

在雅思寫作評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中，任務(wù)回應(yīng)（Task Response, TR）的“回應(yīng)充分度”主要體現(xiàn)在不同分?jǐn)?shù)段的主體段呈現(xiàn)方式上。

題目：

Some people argue that traditional newspapers are no longer necessary in the digital age, as people can  access news more conveniently through other  media.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

譯文：有些人認(rèn)為，在數(shù)字時(shí)代，傳統(tǒng)報(bào)紙不再是必要的，因?yàn)槿藗兛梢酝ㄟ^其他媒體更方便地獲取新聞，你在多大程度上同意或不同意？

一起來看看對于上面這道題目，不同分?jǐn)?shù)段學(xué)員該如何回答？

01

Version 1：(5-6分?jǐn)?shù)段) 

Argument-論證：Opponents points out that readers, listeners and audiences also need to take flexibility into consideration.

Reason1：They suggest that the information provided by the alternatives to newspapers can be consumed more conveniently. 

Reason2：Newspapers, on the other hand,generally provide less convenience. 

02

Version 2：(6-7分?jǐn)?shù)段) 

Argument-論證：Opponents points out that readers, listeners and audiences also need to take flexibility into consideration.

Reason1：They suggest that the information provided by the alternatives to newspapers can be consumed more conveniently. 

Example 1：A housewife or a lorry driver, for instance, can hear about what has happened recently through a radio news programmes whilst doing household takes or driving their truck on a motorway. 

03

Version 3：(7-8分?jǐn)?shù)段)

Argument-論證：Opponents points out that readers,listeners and audiences also need to take flexibility into consideration.

Reason1：They suggest that the information provided by the alternatives to newspapers can be consumed more conveniently.

Example 1：A housewife or a lorry driver, for instance, can hear about what has happened recently through a radio news programmes whilst doing  household takes or driving their truck on a motorway.

Example 1'：A commuter who has long trip to  work may read a report with texts and coloured pictures, or watch a news video clip when travelling to work.

Reason 2：Newspapers, on the other hand, generally provide less convenience.

04

Version 4：（8分及以上）

Argument-論證：Opponents points out that readers, listeners and audiences also need to take flexibility into consideration.

Reason1：They suggest that the information provided by the alternatives to newspapers can be consumed more conveniently. 

Example 1：A housewife or a lorry driver, for instance, can hear about what has happened recently  through a radio news programmes whilst doing household takes or driving their truck on a motorway.

Example 1'： A commuter who has long trip to  work may read a report with texts and coloured pictures, or watch a news video clip when travelling to  work.

Reason 2：Newspapers, on the other hand, generally provide less convenience.

Example 2：lt is true that readers can simply glance at the titles and substitutes while walking, but  to efficiently understand current affairs,they have to concentrate on the texts, which can be difficult for  those who often have to multitask and commute.

回應(yīng)關(guān)鍵詞的重要性

在雅思寫作中，回應(yīng)關(guān)鍵詞（Addressing Keywords）是任務(wù)回應(yīng)（Task Response, TR）的核心評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)之一。題目中的關(guān)鍵詞決定了寫作的方向和重點(diǎn)，是否準(zhǔn)確識別并貫穿全文直接影響分?jǐn)?shù)（尤其是Band 6+的差異）。

題目以及解析：

Governments should invest in public healthcare rather than arts  programs, as healthcare directly impacts citizens' well-being. To what extent do you agree  or disagree?

譯文：政府應(yīng)該投資公共醫(yī)療而不是藝術(shù)項(xiàng)目，因?yàn)獒t(yī)療直接影響公民的福祉。你在多大程度上同意或不同意？

關(guān)鍵詞圈畫：

顯而易見：

public healthcare（公共醫(yī)療）

arts program（藝術(shù)項(xiàng)目）

citizens' well-being（公民福祉）

存在但容易被忽略：

invest（投資）

directly impacts（直接影響）

01

段落A（回應(yīng)全部關(guān)鍵詞）

While healthcare undeniably directly impacts physical survival, the claim to prioritise its funding neglects the indirect role of arts in well-being. Norway's 2022 policy allocating 15% of health budgets to community theatre reduced dementia patients' medication use by 22% (Oslo University  study), proving arts can indirectly alleviate healthcare burdens. Moreover, the verb invest implies  long-term returns: Melbourne's public art installations increased local business revenue by 18%, expanding tax bases for future medical facilities. Thus, narrowly defining impact as direct physical intervention ignores systemic welfare linkages.

TR 緯度點(diǎn)評：

充分回應(yīng)題目各部分，用“挪威資金分配”、“墨爾本稅收增長”論證“投資回報(bào)”(invest)，對比醫(yī)療的“直接影響”與藝術(shù)的“間接作用”(directly impacts)。批判題目中 directly 的狹義定義，提出系統(tǒng)性福利觀。

02

段落B（只回應(yīng)明顯關(guān)鍵詞）

Healthcare is more important than arts. If people  get sick, they need hospitals, not paintings. For example, during COVID, governments built more lCUs  to save lives. Art is just for entertainment and does  not help survival. Therefore, money should go to  healthcare.

TR 緯度點(diǎn)評：

做到了基本回應(yīng)，但僅僅提出“建ICU”的一次性支出（未分析invest的長期性)，默認(rèn)醫(yī)療-直接，藝術(shù)=無關(guān)（未反駁/支持directly impacts的假設(shè))。錯(cuò)誤簡化“福祉-生理生存”，未比較資金投入回報(bào)率差異。

全文總結(jié)

回應(yīng)結(jié)構(gòu)

回應(yīng)內(nèi)容：關(guān)鍵詞選取

圈畫關(guān)鍵所有詞：重要名詞+修飾詞/限定詞+連接詞

自查：“如果忽略這個(gè)詞語，我的論點(diǎn)會(huì)失焦嗎?”

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