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經(jīng)常聽到考鴨們來問：“雅思寫作好難啊，到底用什么句型能加分呢？”“我的聽閱成績(jī)明明都達(dá)到了，就因?yàn)閷懽魍狭撕笸取薄暗降资裁礃拥木渥硬攀强脊傧矚g的呀？”

的確，雅思寫作的高分相比較其他學(xué)科來說會(huì)更有挑戰(zhàn)性，也對(duì)同學(xué)們的邏輯思維和語言能力有著更高的要求。今天Olivia老師就來給大家聊一聊雅思寫作高分論述的幾個(gè)要素，希望可以幫助到正在為雅思寫作撓頭的你！

要素一 審題

雖然“審題”二字看似簡(jiǎn)單，但是很多語言基礎(chǔ)較好的同學(xué)們錯(cuò)失高分都是因?yàn)閷忣}不嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)。在拿到考題后，我們需要耐心細(xì)心的閱讀題干中的每一個(gè)信息，了解清楚題目的真正含義。

例 我們拿下面這個(gè)題目為例：

In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an aging population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages? 

題干中存在兩方立場(chǎng)

A方認(rèn)為：aging population creates problems for governments

B方認(rèn)為：there are benefits if society has more elderly people

而在審題階段，若是忽視掉了A方觀點(diǎn)的“for government”，很多同學(xué)們會(huì)把老齡化人口的弊端往“個(gè)人”身上去拓展，那么就會(huì)在Task Response上失分，被認(rèn)定為“未能完整的對(duì)題目任務(wù)進(jìn)行回應(yīng)”。

要素二 主體段結(jié)構(gòu)

在進(jìn)行主體段寫作時(shí)，很多同學(xué)會(huì)想當(dāng)然的把出現(xiàn)在自己腦子里的論點(diǎn)一股腦的輸出，而忽視了學(xué)術(shù)寫作論證的結(jié)構(gòu)。一個(gè)邏輯排列合理的主體段落應(yīng)該是由三個(gè)部分組成的：

Topic Sentence + Explanation + Supporting Evidence

Topic Sentence：一個(gè)主體段的分論點(diǎn)，起到概括全段中心思想的作用

explanation：對(duì)分論點(diǎn)的詳細(xì)解釋

supporting evidence：支撐前面所提到的分論點(diǎn)

例 大家再看以下兩個(gè)例子的對(duì)比：

例1:Pensions represent another significant expenditure for the government. As life expectancy increases, the government must provide pensions for a longer duration, which significantly burdens its financial resources. However, without the extra cost, the government funds can be allocated on other urgent matters, such as the construction of public infrastructure, alleviating poverty and improving education.

例2：If there is no extra cost on pensions, the government funds can be allocated on other urgent matters, but now the government must provide pensions for longer duration, so it would burden its financial resources. And this can be another significant expenditure for the government.  

例1明顯有著非常清晰的邏輯推進(jìn)，從“養(yǎng)老金會(huì)成為政府的重大開支”入手，解釋道“因?yàn)槿绻藗兓畹母茫托枰Ц陡玫酿B(yǎng)老金，而這會(huì)給政府財(cái)政帶來很大負(fù)擔(dān)”，再通過對(duì)比論證“如果沒有這筆額外開支，政府就可以用這筆資金來解決更加緊急的問題，比如基礎(chǔ)設(shè)施的建設(shè)，解決貧困，提升教育”側(cè)面證明這筆錢其實(shí)對(duì)政府來說很重要，突出老齡化人口給政府帶來的負(fù)擔(dān)。

但是例2卻很難定位到分論點(diǎn)的位置，需要讀者閱讀整個(gè)段落后，才能梳理清楚到底想要表達(dá)的中心思想是什么，想比較而言，邏輯就差了很多，沒有展現(xiàn)出清晰的邏輯推進(jìn)。

要素三 充足論據(jù)

雖然很多同學(xué)能夠有合理的topic sentence去回應(yīng)題目任務(wù)，但是當(dāng)觀點(diǎn)被提出后，是否能夠解釋清晰完整才是最大的挑戰(zhàn)。在Task Response的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中，band 6和band 7的區(qū)別就在于是否能夠develop your main point sufficiently。

例 舉例：

Pensions represent another significant expenditure for the government. As life expectancy increases, the government must provide pensions for a longer duration, whichsignificantly burdens its financial resources. However, without the extra cost, the government funds can be allocated on other urgent matters,such as the construction of public infrastructure, alleviating poverty and improving education.

劃線部分就是充分拓展后的體現(xiàn)，這對(duì)于同學(xué)們的詞匯積累與素材積累都有一定的要求，也是為什么同學(xué)們需要好好背誦，課堂上老師提供的詞伙和高頻話題素材的原因！

好啦，以上就是雅思寫作的高分論述的三大要素，能夠給出審題精準(zhǔn)，段落結(jié)構(gòu)清晰以及論述充分的寫作，想要拿到高分就輕輕松松啦！